TS: The are three ideas to a perfect summer. SD: The first idea to a perfect summer would be the watermelon. ELAB: Watermelon in summer is great because when you eat it the juice from the watermelon drips down from your mouth. SD: The second idea to a perfect summer would be my birthday. ELAB: My birthday is in summer because it is in june and we have ice cream cake and opening presents. SD: The last idea to a perfect summer would being outside. ELAB: Being outside in summer is nice because you can hang with friends and get a nice tan, and also you can just relax. CLOSER: These are the three ideas to a perfect summer.
TS:The perfect summer would have to have 3 amazing attributes to it.
SD:The first attribute is perfect weather
Elab: Perfect weather is a keen essential to a perfect summer because to me, perfect weather is not too hot but not cold either which would have to be anywhere from 74 to 86 degrees.
SD:The second attribute is having plenty of time to hang with all of my friends.
Elab: I mean come on, what’s summer without friends, boring ,that’s what. If my friends aren’t around, I’d probably be drawing(which isn’t a bad thing) or being in the basement playing video games(which is what we would still be doing if my friends where over).
SD:The third and final attribute is not dedicating the whole summer to Poy sippi(where my cabin is).
Elab: Last summer we probably spent 30 to 40 percent of our time up at poy sippi whether it would be boating,fishing or camping. It got very tedious because I wanted to hang with my friends but I didn’t want to bring them to poy sippi as well because we spent most of our time cleaning and fixing the place up(which obviously it would defeat the purpose of bringing them up to my cabin in the first place).
Closer:These are my renditions of what I think my perfect summer would be like to me.
TS My idea of the perfect summer is playing outside, boys and girls club and going to beaches. SD The first reason why it is a perfect summer is playing out side with friends. Elab I like playing outside because you get tanned and you also get good exercise. SD The second reason why it is a perfect summer is I go to the boys and girls club. Elab I like going to the boys and girls club because on Tuesdays they go to Meade pool in the summer. SD The third reason why it is a perfect summer is going to beaches. Elab I like going to beaches because you get to swim and best of all you get to collect sea shells. Closer That is my list of a perfect summer.
TS: Summer, the one season where you don’t have to do any schoolwork at all and there are only three thing that can make it perfect.
SD: The first thing is to not have Summer School.
Elab: Face it, if I had to spend most of my summer going to school, I would never live. I mean really, who wants to go to school if summer is the reason to get away from it?
SD: The second thing is a good birthday.
Elab: My birthday is in the summer so that is a good thing because if my birth day was during the school year I would have to go to school to celebrate my birthday.
SD: The final thing is good weather.
Elab: The weather is important because who wants a summer when it snows or rains? That would be bad especially since my parents give me limited screen time to three hours a day so if it rains all day. I will have to spend my day reading which equals bore galore.
ts. Ive got some great idea for what i want my summer to be. but i'm only going to give you three. sd. Well my first idea that i want to happen to make my summer great is for it to be warm. elab. The reason why is because it is normally never warm in wisconsin. sd. My second idea that would make my summer great. is not really doing much just being able to hang out with my friends. elab. The reason why i want that to happen is because i very rarely get to hangout with them. sd. My third and final idea that would accomplish me having a perfect summer is getting the magic cards i need to build a great magic deck to compete and do good in a magic tournament. elab. The reason why i want that is because I started playing the game not long ago, and i would like to prove my friends wrong by showing them i'm good at the game.
I have three ideas of what the perfect summer would be. S.D The first idea that makes the perfect summer is a perfect sunny day, playing in the yard and having a cold glass of tea. Elab. I think having a cold glass of tea, perfect sunny day and playing in the yard is a part of what makes my summer partially perfect because it’s nice to hear my daycare kids laughing, playing and to see them just lay in the grass in the back yard soaking up the sun makes me pretty happy. S.D My second idea that makes a perfect summer is swimming. Elab. Swimming is my second idea because I love swimming, when swimming I can just chill out and have fun. S.D My last idea that would make my summer perfect is hanging out with my family and friends. Elab. Hanging out with my family and friends is my third idea because I gotta save the best for last, but anyways the real reason is I can stay up late and go hang out with my friends and family at the YMCA and parks. Closer. Those are my three ideas that I think make my perfect summer.
TS: The are three ideas to a perfect summer.
ReplyDeleteSD: The first idea to a perfect summer would be the watermelon.
ELAB: Watermelon in summer is great because when you eat it the juice from the watermelon drips down from your mouth.
SD: The second idea to a perfect summer would be my birthday.
ELAB: My birthday is in summer because it is in june and we have ice cream cake and opening presents.
SD: The last idea to a perfect summer would being outside.
ELAB: Being outside in summer is nice because you can hang with friends and get a nice tan, and also you can just relax.
CLOSER: These are the three ideas to a perfect summer.
ReplyDeleteTS:The perfect summer would have to have 3 amazing attributes to it.
SD:The first attribute is perfect weather
Elab: Perfect weather is a keen essential to a perfect summer because to me, perfect weather is not too hot but not cold either which would have to be anywhere from 74 to 86 degrees.
SD:The second attribute is having plenty of time to hang with all of my friends.
Elab: I mean come on, what’s summer without friends, boring ,that’s what. If my friends aren’t around, I’d probably be drawing(which isn’t a bad thing) or being in the basement playing video games(which is what we would still be doing if my friends where over).
SD:The third and final attribute is not dedicating the whole summer to Poy sippi(where my cabin is).
Elab: Last summer we probably spent 30 to 40 percent of our time up at poy sippi whether it would be boating,fishing or camping. It got very tedious because I wanted to hang with my friends but I didn’t want to bring them to poy sippi as well because we spent most of our time cleaning and fixing the place up(which obviously it would defeat the purpose of bringing them up to my cabin in the first place).
Closer:These are my renditions of what I think my perfect summer would be like to me.
TS My idea of the perfect summer is playing outside, boys and girls club and going to beaches.
ReplyDeleteSD The first reason why it is a perfect summer is playing out side with friends.
Elab I like playing outside because you get tanned and you also get good exercise.
SD The second reason why it is a perfect summer is I go to the boys and girls club.
Elab I like going to the boys and girls club because on Tuesdays they go to Meade pool in the summer.
SD The third reason why it is a perfect summer is going to beaches.
Elab I like going to beaches because you get to swim and best of all you get to collect sea shells.
Closer That is my list of a perfect summer.
ts The best summer is when the weather is hot every day.
ReplyDeletesd The first thing is the key to a good summer is swimming.
elab Swimming is the important because its fun and good exercise and you get a good tan from it.
sd The next thing is the best thing to do in summer is going to the theme parks.
elab The best thing about theme parks are thrilling and fun to go there with friends.
sd The last thing thing to make the best summer is just hanging with friends.
elab hanging with friends can have supper funny moments and just have the best time.
closer this is how i would have the perfect summer
TS: Summer, the one season where you don’t have to do any schoolwork at all and there are only three thing that can make it perfect.
ReplyDeleteSD: The first thing is to not have Summer School.
Elab: Face it, if I had to spend most of my summer going to school, I would never live. I mean really, who wants to go to school if summer is the reason to get away from it?
SD: The second thing is a good birthday.
Elab: My birthday is in the summer so that is a good thing because if my birth day was during the school year I would have to go to school to celebrate my birthday.
SD: The final thing is good weather.
Elab: The weather is important because who wants a summer when it snows or rains? That would be bad especially since my parents give me limited screen time to three hours a day so if it rains all day. I will have to spend my day reading which equals bore galore.
Closer: That is what makes a good summer.
ts. Ive got some great idea for what i want my summer to be. but i'm only going to give you three.
ReplyDeletesd. Well my first idea that i want to happen to make my summer great is for it to be warm.
elab. The reason why is because it is normally never warm in wisconsin.
sd. My second idea that would make my summer great. is not really doing much just being able to hang out with my friends.
elab. The reason why i want that to happen is because i very rarely get to hangout with them.
sd. My third and final idea that would accomplish me having a perfect summer is getting the magic cards i need to build a great magic deck to compete and do good in a magic tournament.
elab. The reason why i want that is because I started playing the game not long ago, and i would like to prove my friends wrong by showing them i'm good at the game.
I have three ideas of what the perfect summer would be.
ReplyDeleteS.D The first idea that makes the perfect summer is a perfect sunny day, playing in the yard and having a cold glass of tea.
Elab. I think having a cold glass of tea, perfect sunny day and playing in the yard is a part of what makes my summer partially perfect because it’s nice to hear my daycare kids laughing, playing and to see them just lay in the grass in the back yard soaking up the sun makes me pretty happy.
S.D My second idea that makes a perfect summer is swimming.
Elab. Swimming is my second idea because I love swimming, when swimming I can just chill out and have fun.
S.D My last idea that would make my summer perfect is hanging out with my family and friends.
Elab. Hanging out with my family and friends is my third idea because I gotta save the best for last, but anyways the real reason is I can stay up late and go hang out with my friends and family at the YMCA and parks.
Closer. Those are my three ideas that I think make my perfect summer.