Monday, October 14, 2013

Roller Coasters!

What makes an awesome roller coaster?  Answer this essay question using the following format:  TS, SD, Elab, SD, Elab, SD, Elab, Closer.

5 comments:

  1. What makes a awesome roller coaster.
    TS: The best roller coaster has three important aspects.

    SD: The first important aspect is lots of speed.

    Elab: A fast roller coaster gives the ride a excited feeling to it.

    SD: The second important aspect is good retry value.

    Elab: Good retry value means it doesn’t get old quickly when you go on a roller coaster a lot.

    SD: The third important aspect is the bumps and loops.

    Elab: Bumps and loops are important because they give you that tickly feeling in your stomach that gives you a rush of excitement.

    Closer: These are the three main things that I think a awesome roller coaster needs to have.

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  2. What makes an awesome roller coaster?
    By: Morgan Nett

    TS: An awesome roller coaster is made up of three different components.

    SD: The first component if a roller coaster would be the speed.

    ELAB: The speed of the roller coaster is awesome because it gives me a tingling feeling in my stomach.

    SD: The second component of a roller coaster would be the big hills.

    ELAB: The big hills make an awesome roller coaster because when you go down the big hill you sort of get out of your comfort zone.

    SD: The last component of a roller coaster would be the bumpyness.

    ELAB: The bumpiness makes an awesome roller coaster because when you’re riding on the roller coaster it tends to jerk you around.

    CLOSER: Thats what makes up an awesome roller coaster.

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  3. The Three Main Features of a Roller Coaster
    By: Adam Lawrence

    TS: There are three main main features of a roller coaster and I would be happy to share them with you.

    SD: The first main feature of a roller coaster is a short line.

    Elab: The short line is important because face it, nobody wants to wait in line for 12 hours.

    SD: The second main feature is the feeling of how the cart feels on your butt.

    Elab: That is important because nobody wants to sit on a brick.

    SD: The third and final reason is the ride itself.

    Elab: The ride itself is important because you want a ride that blows your mind.

    Closer: Those are the three main features of a roller coaster.

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  4. TS An awesome roller coaster is made up of three different things.

    SD The first thing that makes an awesome roller coaster is the speed.

    Elab Speed is important because it goes faster than cars go on the highway.

    SD The second thing that makes an awesome roller coaster is the big drops.

    Elab The big drops is important because it feels like your heart dropped.

    SD The finale thing that makes an awesome roller coaster is going upside down.

    Elab I like going upside down because you feel like you're flying.

    Closer That is what makes an awesome roller coaster.

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  5. TS The best rollercoaster is a thrill ride and it has 3 main things.

    SD The first thing is location is key.

    ELAB This place is nice and warm so you re not freezing going on the ride.

    SD The next important thing is the speed.

    elab the speed is the best when you are up/out of your seat like footing.

    sd finally imitation is bone chilling.
    elab you look it in line you are going at to the top click click clicking stops top of the hill. then we put ours hands up.

    closer That is what I think is the best roller coaster.

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